the side of me most people never see
Every blade of grass stands at attention
Horses sniff, sense the alert
Even the sun stands still
Copyright © 2018 Abigail Gronway – All Rights Reserved
Written for #OctPoWriMo
Scansion:
Kimo
Israeli version of the haiku
no movement in the imagery
syllabic: 10-7-6
unrhymed
We are at war. Life is a battle. Every day we fight for joy, peace… love. This is correspondence from the front line.
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“Even the sun stands still.” Is this an allusion to Joshua?
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Yes, it is, Roger. Very astute of you to pick up on that.
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Marvelous
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