Florida Winter

misty raindrops dance
like snowflakes in the night sky
on silent tip-toes

pirouetting softly down
stars and rain dance pas de deux

December 25, 2019 ~ Tan Renga
Copyright © 2020 Abigail Gronway – All Rights Reserved


Tan Renga
North America’s answer to the Japanese linked form Renku or Renga.
A cooperative poem of 5 lines, made up of a tercet followed by a couplet
The tercet, 5-7-5 syllables, is written by one poet.
The couplet, 7-7 syllables, is written as a response by another poet.

I wrote this with my daughter, who contributed the couplet.

 

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