Bright Eyes

Like fields of snow,
your eyes glow with
light so airy.

Copyright © 2018 Abigail Gronway – All Rights Reserved

Scansion:
Than Bauk
This Burmese form is shorter than the haiku, but more structured.
It is written in three lines, with four syllables per line and a descending step rhyme:
XXXA
XXAX
XAXX

 

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