warm as the sunshine
sweet as the honeysuckle
fresh as a shower
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Scansion:
Haikuette
Introduced by Louise Stipfle in the Caulkins Handbook and included in Berg’s Pathways.
American response to the traditional haiku
Each line must be a separate entity, yet contribute to the whole
written without verbs
unrhymed
titled
syllabic: 5-7-5 (17 syllables or less)
Challenging to write without verbs, and to have each line a separate being, yet have the whole hang together as one. You did it beautifully. I don’t know that I could.
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Sure you can. If I can do it, then you can too.
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Lovely
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Thank you
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