Who sees the heat that in my core
Has made me burn and boil and sore,
Heat you produced when first you came,
The tender way you spoke my name?
Your smile outshines a thousand suns.
When I’m with you, we’re the only ones
Who ever lived or drew a breath;
To be without you would be death.
You build within such ecstasy;
You whisper, “Baby, cum with me!”
The tension mounts, the pressure builds—
Eruption! My release now fills
Your hungry chasm, also sore.
So soon you’re begging me for more.


August 3, 2017 ~ couplet chain
Copyright © 2017 Linda Luna – All Rights Reserved

10 Replies to “Eruption”

Questions or Comments?

Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.

The Daily Spur

Your daily prompts to spur on your writing


Author, Poet, Blogger, Father, Reader And More

Simply Chronically Ill

thoughts from someone who lives it

Astra Poetica

Exploring a Universe of Poetry: a 52-Week Poetic Form Challenge

Poems for Warriors

"He heals the brokenhearted and binds up their wounds." Ps 147:3

flashlight batteries - Ali Grimshaw

writing circles & poetry to keep your light on


Songwriter / Guitarist

Natalie Breuer

Natalie. Writer. Photographer. Etc.

Hannah Spuler

Bringing truth, goodness and beauty to children~ one whimsical (and sometimes silly!) story at a time.

%d bloggers like this: