He Came

He came to earth
to be our Redeemer—
replaced our sadness with His mirth.
Shepherds announced
His birth.

Marianne
Created by Viola Berg
Pentastich
Syllabic structure: 4-6-8-4-2
Rhyme scheme: axaxa, with x being unrhymed
Centered

2 Replies to “He Came”

Frank Hubeny says:

December 25, 2020 at 09:22

Merry Christmas!

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1. Abigail Gronway says:
  
  December 31, 2020 at 10:38
  
  Merry Christmas, and a Happy New Year!
  
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