So long
We waited for
This day to come. And now
Our patience yields its rich reward.
So with
This ring
I pledge my life to you alone.
No longer two, but one,
In body, mind,
And soul.
Copyright © 2018 Abigail Gronway – All Rights Reserved
Scansion:
Mirror Cinquain — 10-line unrhymed poem (decastich) made up of two cinquains, where the second one is reversed
Syllabic count: 2-4-6-8-2-2-8-6-4-2
Photo courtesy of alexrobinm and Pixabay
This is nice.
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Thank you, Sadah.
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So beautiful! Did you write this for your own wedding or for someone else that is close to you? I love all of your poetry. Quite frankly, I’m in awe of your poetic talent!
And so… I don’t know if you accept blogging awards or not; it’s okay if you don’t. But please know that I’ve nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award. You can find more details at http://throughinkandimage.com/2018/03/15/two-blogging-awards/
❤ to you, my extremely talented friend!
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I wrote it for a dear friend’s wedding.
Thank you so much for thinking of me for the Sunshine Blogger award, Lynn! I am honored and deeply touched. But no, I do not accept awards on either of my blogs. I really need to put that in the sidebar. 🙂 I keep thinking about it and procrastinating….
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This was a wonderful portrayal of the longing of becoming one with your Beloved and exchanging vows! Bellissimo, Dear Abigail!!
xoxo
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Thank you, Dear Chuck!
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This was so romantic, Abigail! Love your writing!!
xoxo
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come read this moving poem of longing and the exchanging of vows.
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Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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You are so welcome! This was a really great piece!
xoxo
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