Dark
Figure
Stands starkly
Her frame exposed
In utmost detail
Mystery in plain sight
For there’s not the slightest hint
Of what lies within the border—
What sorrows? what joys? what deep regrets?
Mona Lisa was not so hard to read.
Copyright © 2018 Abigail Gronway – All Rights Reserved
Scansion:
Etheree (i.e. Count Up)
Syllabic pattern: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10
Rhyme: none
Theme: any
This was great! Interesting form. Cool topic! Are you playing Night Owl???
xoxo
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Thank you, Chuck. Yes, and no. That one was scheduled for now, but I am still up working on a post for my other blog. 🙂
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Ha! Busy little bee???
xoxo
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Yes, and pretty soon it’s going to catch up to me. 🙂 Hope you had a Happy Valentine’s Day.
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Lovely, I love that form of poetry. Thanks for sharing it with us.
Happy days laughing.
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Thank you, kiwinana. I’ve enjoyed reading many of your own Etherees. ❤
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Reblogged this on Smorgasbord – Variety is the spice of life and commented:
Abigail Gronway with her poem Silhouette (Etheree – Syllabic pattern 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9) Abigail also has some poetry challenges.
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Sally, thank you very much for sharing this. Have a wonderful day!
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And I have always thought that Mona Lisa had tooth ache.
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That’s funny! (I wonder if it was true….) 🙂
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You had me at ‘mystery in plain sight’.
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Such a mystery that is!
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I like the idea of a mystery harder to read than Mona LIsa.
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Thank you, Frank. I appreciate you saying so.
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