However did you come to notice me,
A shy and young, yet fragile castaway?
You, sir, amazed me with your gallantry.
I thought such graciousness had long gone to decay,
But you brought hope into my clouded day.
You gave me wings and taught me how to fly;
You gave me my first view of sun’s gold ray.
Together we ascended to the sky.
And when I broke my wings and could not play,
You mended them, your true love to display.
September 29, 2017 ~ Decuain
Rhyme scheme: ababbcbcbb
© 2017 Abigail Gronway – All Rights Reserved
Decuain [pronounced deck-WAN]: decastich in iambic pentameter, written on any subject.
The last two lines may rhyme in aa, bb, or cc, but all the other lines must rhyme as indicated above.
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This was so beautiful!! Loved it – especially the lines – “However did you come to notice me” and “You gave me wings and taught me how to fly”! Super! True love feels like that doesn’t it?
Chuck
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Thank you, Chuck. 🙂
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet and commented:
Come and enjoy the wonderful love poem – “YOU GAVE ME WINGS”
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Thank you for sharing. 🙂
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you. 🙂
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Thanks for using this form. I will try to write my own poem using it. Your poem is beautifully written.
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Oh, I hope you do! And I look forward to reading it. In fact, I just started following you. 🙂
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